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You were upstairs in your room, drawing a picture for your father. It was Father's day, and since you were only five, you had to draw him a picture. It was a picture of you and him, and it said 'I love you Daddy!' on it. You really hoped he would like it! You walked out of your room, and looked both ways and when you didn't see your father you walked to his office. You peeked inside of it, and he wasn't in it. You walked in, opening his desk and grabbing an envelope and you stuffed the piece of paper inside of it. You licked it, then closed it. You climbed into his chair and grabbed one of his pens and wrote his name on it, then jumped out of his chair and ran downstairs. He was sitting on the couch watching some movie and you snuck into the kitchen and put it on the table. You went into the living room and climbed up on the couch and into his lap.

"Hi Daddy!" You smiled.

"Oh, hey (Name)! I was just about to go looking for you!" He gave you a hug while smiling.

You wrapped your little arms around him the best you could, returning the hug. "I was just in my room coloring."

"What were you drawing?" He asked and looked down at you.

"Something for someone very special!"

"Who is that special someone? Do you have a boyfriend?" He joked, laying you down on the couch and started tickling you.

"N-no! I don't!" You said, giggling, "S-stop it Daddy!" He laughed, and stopped tickling you.

"So, who is the card for?" He asked, smiling brightly.

"You'll have to find it to know who it is for!"

"Oh, I have to find it do I? That'll be easy!" He stood up, walking upstairs. You followed behind him, laughing a little.

He walked into your room and started looking around, "Is it in here?"

"I can't tell you!"

"Can you give me hints?" He looked over to you.

"Uh...Yes! It's in this house!"

He laughed, "I know that (Name). But give me another hint, like is it in this room? Is it under something?"

"It's not in this room." You said, crossing your little arms.

He walked out of your room and walked to his office. He looked on his desk, in all of he drawers, under his desk and in his chair but he didn't see a piece of paper.

"Another hint?" He asked, frowning a little.

"It isn't in this room either and it's on top of something."

He nodded, "It should be a little easier now then." He walked out of the office and when you left the room he closed the door then went to the bathroom. He looked on the sink, on the toilet and in the bathtub in case you put it in there.

"Another hint, (Name)?"

"Sure. It's on a table."

"That really narrows in down!" He smiled, and walked to his room. He looked on his night table, his desk that was in his room, the table in his room and the dresser.

"Another hint?"

"It's downstairs!"

"Let's go look down there then!" He smiled and picked you up and ran downstairs. He looked on the coffee table, though he would have seen you put it there, but he wanted to make sure. He looked at all of the tables downstairs, and sighed. He walked to the kitchen and sat at the table, frowning. He saw an envelope sitting on the table. It had his name on it, so he picked it up and opened it.

It was a card, with you and him on it. It said 'I love you Daddy!' on it, making him smile. He opened it and read what was on the inside of it and it brought tears to his eyes.

'Daddy, I love you. I couldn't live without you. Really I couldn't you are the one who feeds me. You are my Hero and you will always be the bestest Daddy in the whole entire galaxy!'

Most of the words were not spelled right, but he would still understand them. He stood up, and turned around and saw you standing there, smiling brightly. You had his smile.

He went over to you then dropped to his knees and hugged you.

You hugged back. You noticed the tears, and frowned, "Are you sad that I didn't buy anything for you?"

"No, I'm happy (Name)! This is the best gift you could have given me! I love it, but there's one thing I love more than this card."

"What's that...? A car? A hamburger?"

"No silly. You!" He pulled away, smiling at you. You smiled back and wiped his tears.

"Happy Father's Day, Daddy! And I love you too!"
I wanted to do a little thing for Father's Day! I love writing stories with Alfie in them! >W< I love Alfie! I hope you guys enjoyed this!
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YoshiSHITJUSTGOTREAL Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
"one thing I love more than this card."

dude, he says it's me, so...

"one girl I love more than this card."

"What's that...? Mommy/Artie? Human hamburger?"

LOL... WHY DID I EVEN CORRECT YOU. XDDDDD
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jennygal2015 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2015
I...died.

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MabelHyuga75 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015
AWWW This is so cute! >/////<
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endergirl105 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
so adorable 
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lobospade Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2015  Student Artist
Too much cuteness *dead*
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Shadowlover1796 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
CUTENESS OVERLOAD!~ Takane Enomoto (Shyness Overload) [V1] 
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:iconnordicfangirl10:
NordicFanGirl10 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015
So who's the mother?
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:iconlilyakiyama:
LilyAkiyama Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2015
Clap Epic clap 

AMAZING QUESTION
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rubyanimegirl Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015
*crys* feels
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HawkfireofTC Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This almost made me cry, it's so cute!
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nyanturtel Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
SO KAWAII!!! :iconhandspazzplz: :iconfabulousplz:
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pie46733 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Daddy, I love you. I couldn't live without you. Really I couldn't you are the one who feeds me.
Omg I laughed so hard at this
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StylishCat100 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's so cute, it's freakin' giving me cavities!
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Iggy-sun Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
T-T so.bloody.cute
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LullabySkyX Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cute~ I love these!
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ArsenicGallows Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
FEEEEEEEEELLLSSSSS.  ~ I love it great story ~
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cookiemonster2344 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
DA FEALZ 
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LailaBuscus Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
WHY AM I CRYING.Pikachu Crying Plz 
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InsanityNeedsRoses Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student Interface Designer
I wish I had a dad like him omg-
Anyway, EPIC story! Icon #3 - Dance Dean, dance! (Harlem Shake) 
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alliekat1008 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Same! >w<

Thank you! :D
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InsanityNeedsRoses Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student Interface Designer
NP!
Oh my god - OMG 
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Mochi-Bounce Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful work!
have a cupcake~ Free Avatar - CupTardCake 
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alliekat1008 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, friend~

Yay, cupcakes are awesome! >w<
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Mochi-Bounce Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i know right! cx
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HetalianQueen Featured By Owner May 30, 2014
'Really I couldn't you are the one who feeds me.' XD
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littlemisskage Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Student Writer
HOLY FUDGE IT IS SO KAWAII!!!!!!!
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Theanimeangel Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
Kawaii!!! *dies of cuteness*

Kira (my 2p): *Picks up body and car keys* I'll take her to the hospital.
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kjxyz1234-gmail Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Where's my mommy
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Jazzy-Jazzy-Woo-Woo Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
She was hiding in the closet or something XD
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Dogshampoo24 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
Dawwwwwwwwwww cuteness overload activate boop
Mr chair: I taught her well cute story mr chair approves ^J^
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alliekat1008 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Haha I'm glad you thought it was cute! :D
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helenadoodle Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
awwwwh!
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alliekat1008 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^w^
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helenadoodle Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
soooo CUUUTTTEEE~! -dies of cuteness- 
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alliekat1008 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thanks~ ^ ^
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XioTehLeafKing Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student General Artist
That was so friggin' ADORABLE!!!!
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alliekat1008 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~!
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XioTehLeafKing Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Student General Artist
 Prego~!
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ITxIRxLxS Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Don't make me cry! When my parents and I went to pick out/see my senior pictures, Dad started crying. I loe my sweet Daddy so much! <3
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alliekat1008 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw! It is really hard on the parent when the child grows up! 
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link2008 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013
This was just soo freaking adorably cute! ^0^ loved it!!
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alliekat1008 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~!
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pumpkin-milk Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
America is so adorable~ :iconbegplz:
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alliekat1008 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
He is~!
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ROCHUKAWAII Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
D'AWWWWWWW
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alliekat1008 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^ ^
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monkeylvr13 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
So sweet!!!!!!!
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alliekat1008 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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monkeylvr13 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
Welcomee
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